Hello Darleen,

Happy 5th Account Anniversary!

My Thoughts: It was a pleasure to read your story 'Chocolate Maricles' today. I was entertained through the entire story and I thought the characters were well rounded. I like how the couple is looking at these chocolates and not believing this can possibly be real, of course, Abby was a little more skeptical that Tim.

My Favorite Part: I really like the scene at the end when Abby's swaddle is full of chocolates, a nice surprise ending.

{e:moSuggestions: I didn't notice anything distracting or that I didn't like. This was a great read!

Sincerely,
MoonFae

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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .