Hello Tinker



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

I haven't seen you around in a while, I hope life is treating you fair?
Anyway, back to business, Great title, I so wish we could achieve it. This world would be a better place. And I feel it works well with this poem.

I love the different color of roses corresponding to a part of life. The imagery is good and I confess, it brought a tear to me eyes. You followed the form perfectly. This one will be hard to beat. As always good rhythm and flow.

Good luck with the contest.
I really enjoyed reading your poem.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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