Greetings, Valerie



} My Thoughts: From a GoT fan, I love your folder here, I'll have to come and read some more! This is a very nice poem you have here about 'The House of Black and White' with Arya's feelings and the many-faced god. Arya wanted revenge for her fathers' death and was willing to do whatever it took to get to the right people.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is the fourth line of the second stanza where it reads "His love is unconditional Daddy is mine and I am his.". I think this truly expresses the love Arya had for her father.

My Suggestions: I just noticed a couple of minor grammatical errors.

He want me to be better than him =
He wants me to be better than him

I"ll never know how you do it =
I'll never know how you do it


Sincerely,
MoonFae
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