Greetings Robert E Baker,

Initial thoughts: I enjoyed your story, I was shocked at the outcome with Mrs. Sharpe's cat. This takes me back to the good old Tales From the Crypt days as it has that kind of twist. I think you really brought Mrs. Sharpes personality out. I was imagining this sweet old woman the entire time I was reading until she changed . I also liked that you were very detailed, I always love being able to imagine and have a good visual of the surroundings.

My favorite part and why: My favorite part is when Mrs. Sharpe is wearing the cat collar, that made me laugh just picturing an old lady wearing a collar.

Suggestions: I didn't notice any glaring errors. Looks good to me.

Keep writing and have a great day!

Sincerely,
MoonFae
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