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The House Next Door  [13+]
The house next door is empty.....
by Jellyfish
Review by Past Member 'afinger83'
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings Jellyfish,

*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*


🌈My Thoughts: I really enjoyed your ghost poem. You made it fun and it was a delight to read. I really enjoyed the flow and the rhyme scheme. I also like the story within the poem.


🌹My Favorite Part: My favorite part is when you mentioned filling the house with a party of friends to drive the ghosts away. I thought that was funny.

🌟My Suggestions: I didn't see any lines in need of repairs.

Sincerely,
MoonFae *Butterfly2P*
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