Hello Lilacmist,



💠 My Thoughts: I chose to review this poem because I like this piece most of all from what I've seen in your port. You released your emotions and let go. I bet it felt good to write this. I really enjoyed your poem and some of my favorite poetry is the kind with raw expression. A favorite poet of mine that writes that way is Rupi Kaur I think it's spelled. This reminds me of her style and I love it.

💠 My Favorite Part: I really liked the part about past reality and being lost in gloom. I think most of us have had at least one occasion where we felt this way. "In the depths of dispear" 'Anne of Green Gables' might call it. Writing is such a great release for that and maybe you already know this, but your writing not only helps you, but those of us who (have gone/are going) through similar feelings.

💠 My Suggestions: I like how it is, just as you wrote it.

Sincerely,
MoonFae
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