Hello Geirr,



📁My Thoughts: I enjoyed your story here and I liked the mysterious aspect of it. I think you established the character very well for this flash fiction piece. I like all of the detail down to the mans nails.

📂My Favorite Part: I enjoyed the part with the crickets. I didn't know what to think at that moment and was trying to thing what the crickets might mean.

✒My Suggestions: My only suggestion would be to add more because I'd love to read more.

Sincerely,
MoonFae
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