Greetings Ryan,



💘 My Thoughts: I really enjoyed your poem 'Breath to Breath' today. I like the rhyming and structure. Most of all, I like the words. It's hard when we lose someone we love and I can tell that this is written from the heart. It's so emotional how they both are waiting for their love. I think this is very creative and uniquely written.

🌲 My Favorite Part: I really liked the third stanza where you wrote "That pain that emptiness brings from love taken will not leave", I think this line really stands out. You do a great job describing the pain from the loss.

🎈 My Suggestions: No changes needed.

Sincerely,
MoonFae
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