Greetings Renfucious,



My Thoughts: I thoroughly enjoyed your story "Heroes". My first impression was that I liked the opening line 'It’s strange, the ways we choose our heroes.' I think this line really sets the stage. I also liked all of the detail and the way this story is told, made me feel like a close friend was sharing a memory with me. That's some great writing.

My Favorite Part: I really enjoyed reading the part about the teacher. I think we all have that one teacher we look up to and admire or hope to be like one day.

My Suggestions: Everything looked great. I can't imagine anything missing.

Sincerely,
MoonFae
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