Hello dawsongirl,



🌈 My Thoughts: I enjoyed your story. This is probably very close to the reaction back then when the first dictionary was written. I think your story was clever, slightly comical, and easy to follow. I bet the assistant editor regretted his words street another company published it.

🌠 My Favorite Part: I really like when you mention adding chubby babies and crossing out a majority of the unnecessary words. I thought that part added just the right amount of flare to your story.

🌻 My Suggestions: I didn't see any lines in need of repairs.

Sincerely,
MoonFae
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