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Greetings Last_One1,

*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*


*TulipB* My Thoughts: You say a lot in only 17 syllables. This haiku is written well. Spring is a season enjoyed by many, you mention the scents and how not only flowers, but love blooms during this hot time of the year. I think the flow is also very nice.

*TulipR* My Favorite Part: My favorite part was when you mentioned intoxication. Scents and atmosphere can definitely have that effect.

*TulipO* My Suggestions: Keep writing.

Sincerely,
MoonFae *Butterfly2P*
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