Greetings dennisctc,



My Thoughts: I enjoyed your story "The Billionaire's Twin". I think you did a great job developing the character and keeping this interesting. I was not expecting him to decide to take over his brothers life. It seems like he has the skills to pull it off too. I'd love to see what happens next.

My Favorite Part: I really like how he played off being Jonathan when he ran into his friend.

My Suggestions: Keep writing. Great story!

Sincerely,
MoonFae
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