Greetings topwriter,

My Thoughts: I thought your article was interesting and went over a lot of useful information for people that may not know much about autism.

My Favorite Part: There are a couple parts that I didn't think worked well in your piece. The first being the line that reads "The autistic child is constantly a burden to their family in most cases and they don't lead a god life" I think you meant good, but I think you may also want to do more research. Many autistic children lead good lives and their families are usually informed about the disease and want to be helpful and do not see their child as a burden. Secondly, I would suggest changing where you call the autistic child a victim to something else. A victim is someone that suffers at the fault of someone else, it's not anyone's fault that the child is autistic.

My Suggestions: Try to have a more empathetic approach when writing about disabilities as you may inadvertently offend someone who has this disability or has a friend or family member with it.

Sincerely,
MoonFae
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