Hello W.D. Wilcox,

My Thoughts: I came across your story and I'm glad I did. I really loved reading about Billy and Theo and how they became friends. I also liked how Billy's cousin Charlotte ended up having a friend that's an elf as well. This was such a cute story and it's great for children, if my daughter was old enough I would have read it to her. :)

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was when Theo reached out to Billy when he was crying and offered to be friends. I like that there were sensitive moments that formed their bond and friendship, it really brought the story together.

My Suggestions: I didn't see any distractions as I read the story, everything looked good.

Sincerely,
MoonFae
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