Greetings Hugo,

My Thoughts: I really enjoyed your prologue for 'The Choosers and the Chosen'. I think the story is entertaining and wow at the surprise with the emerald eyes, makes me wonder if Sir Caladus had something to do with Sir Aldrick's attack. Or possibly after Sir Aldrick thought he killed the immortal, the immortal took over his body? A lot of possibilities. The parts with the princess are interesting, kind of has me wondering how she's ties into all of this. Maybe she is longing for someone as Sir Aldrick thought, hmm. Definitely loved the read.

My Favorite Part: I liked the ending most because it had that surprise that made me want to read more.

My Suggestions: Keep writing. 🙂

Sincerely,
MoonFae
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