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 The Sirens.  [E]
the Sirens song should always be feared.
by inkwell
Review of The Sirens.  
Review by Past Member 'afinger83'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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HELLO INKWELL,

My Thoughts: I really enjoyed your poem about sirens. I enjoyed the story you have here. This is creatively written and offers a lot of fantastical details. I like the rhythm here, as I read it, the rhythm was spot on. I liked the warnings about the sirens with sailors and the sirens song. I'm putting this at 5 stars because I feel it truly deserves it.

My Favorite Part: I really like the part about the hag under water, I never knew that about sirens.

My Suggestions: I didn't see any lines in need of repairs.

Sincerely,
MoonFae *Butterfly2P*
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