Greetings trafick,

My Thoughts: I like your poem about fibromyalgia and I especially like that it's acrostic. I suffer from my fybro pains every day since I was teenager and I found that I can relate to all the feelings you have about it.

My Favorite Part: The line "Maddening to find a treatment plan that works" really stood out to me because it's so difficult to find treatment, especially since not enough research has been done yet. Thankfully Fibromyalgia is now recognized by the cancer society, so more research is starting to be done.

My Suggestions: I think everything looked great. I noticed you didn't use any punctuation in your poem, but that's a matter of preference and I didn't encounter any trouble with the flow or see any areas where a comma would be needed to help with the read.

Sincerely,
MoonFae
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