Greetings Warped Sanity,

My Thoughts: I enjoyed your poem so much that I had to read it a couple times. I love going back to poems I really enjoy and reading over the lines and thinking about them. I think many of us go through traggic events in our lives where it can sometimes feel like it just keeps getting worse, I know I have. Sometimes we blame ourselves or think we're being punished. I felt like your poem conveys that and I also gathered some feelings of regret and wanting to change. It's kind of sad really because it makes me think of a time when I felt broken myself. There's always positives if we look hard.

My Favorite Part: I like the part "While I veil misery with smile" because this is what I've always done and know, this is a trait of someone that takes great thought in others and doesn't want to bring them down too.

My Suggestions: it's great the way it is.

Sincerely,
MoonFae
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