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Review of Quit Whining  
Review by Beacon's Light
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi there

I have just read this piece you wrote and it made a lot of sense what you said. I have heard so many people whine about things and it's not even important either. To give you a good example, I watch Fox News and you hear what's happening and these people whine about different stuff, it's getting crazy even now than 25 years ago. I just don't understand why we can't say anything about religion or what political party you're in. I believe in the Bible and only God can judge someone what they have done wrong. I like the way you wrote this and it's true because people would whine about every little thing. I think, if someone wants to have a debate, they should do it without getting mad or whine about it. My personal favorite is whine with cheese. Well, I like it a lot that it made me laugh a little but it's so true what you said. The way I feel about it, you said it pretty good and very straight forward. I hope you keep writing and you will be a good author. I do have a daughter who whines so I know what you're saying.

Keep on writing
Beacon44

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