Hello TKLfeather,



My Thoughts: This was a cute and unique story about friends and how they were able to share their hobbies and love for feet. I think you did a great job keeping the reader entertained and your characters were nicely developed.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is when Nick first meets his new friend. It's always nice to make new friends, especially in a place where you don't yet know anyone.

My Suggestions: My only suggestion would be to try to work on your grammar, I'm not saying it's easy, take this from someone that was homeschooled. Maybe try using the program grammerly to help.

The following errors distracted from your wonderful story:

"feels numb and immobilized I looks up"
"felt numb and immobilized. I looked up"

"younger than wheat he actually was. "
"younger than what he actually was. "

"and offered to friends"
"and offered to be friends"

Sincerely,
MoonFae
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