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         *Pumpkin2* Greetings, Kurt Philip Behm ! I found your item, "Invalid Item" , in Random Reviews and decided to review it. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

Flow
         Perfect.

Punctuation/Grammar
         I found no issues with punctuation or grammar.

Thoughts/Suggestions
         I have no suggestions for improvement. It's a sad piece and written so simply but filled with emotion.

         *Starb* My favorite lines...
                             His pallbearers
                             —the written word
Wow...

*Thumbsup* Nicely written!

Have a great day and...
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*
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