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All Hallows Eve  [ASR]
Sometimes you hold a feast for the living and the dead -- Samhain.
by ElaineElaine
Review of All Hallows Eve  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hello there, ElaineElaine

This is a Simply Positive Review! *Butterfly2V*



Why I stopped by?

Your item popped up on the random read and review generator. *Smile*

What did I really enjoy?

*Ghost* Oh, my goodness, I loved the whole Samhain celebration. The feast described made me hungry! *Laugh* It was a perfect set up for a haunting story that would prove itself at midnight, marking the day's end.

What gave me a little pause?

"Her black dress fluttered about her keens [knees] as she hurried to them."

"The middle aged man kissed her cheek and reached to huge [hug] his father."


Further Observations:

I enjoyed this mysterious and ghostly story. I think with a little edit of some of the typos, it would be perfect. I also think the 3.5 sitting there, doesn't do it justice. A lot of thought went into bringing the hauntingly creepy story to life. I appreciated that. *Bat2*


Parting thoughts:

Great read, especially during this time of year. I love Halloween! I enjoyed the ending and felt the emotions of the family at the gathering. Plus, a mother always wants what's best for her child, even if it means never seeing her again. *Witchlegs1*


Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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