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Review of Liara  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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WOW! That was very well written. I am so amazed. That was so well written I could get right into it, and I had great imagery. I could see grandma at a stove cooking and see her lips tighten. I can see the faded picture, brown with age.

I have a white bible given to me from the children's home I lived in and I put a yellow flower from the daffodil parade.

I love the 'in another time and place' line. You did make me wonder what kind of poison did she take? Did she not think of how her husband would suffer at her passing? I seriously have a tear in my eye.

Thank's so much for sharing. I also do genealogy so this was great.
love, LinnAnn

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