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Review by Angus
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Bon jour, Cat!
For writing this during your lunch time, this is really impressive! It has a flavor *Smirk2* of the story Alive (the real story about a rugby team stranded in the Andes after a place crash-if you haven't seen it, I highly recommend it. The book's good too), and writing it in the 1st person was a great choice.
Indeed, hunger can drive people to madness (also reminds me of the Donner Party), and it's amazing what some people will do to survive. But then again, would I eat another person if it were a matter of life or death? Would you? *Hungry*
Great spelling and telling, but it was those last nine words that really made this shine!
Bravo!
'...which I would surely try to eat as well if my rotted teeth weren't in so much pain, the jagged edges poking into the insides of my cheeks and the slab of drying muscle that was once a tongue.' (seriously cool description! *ThumbsUpL*)
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and I'd really love to see more of your stories in the contest!

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