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Review #4445738
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 Autumn Always Comes  [ASR]
A free verse poem about my favorite season. Shadows and Light Contest entry
by Jeff
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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What brought tHiNg to glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* We are both doing the I Write in 2018 activity and you posted before me in the forum. It is always a pleasure to read your work.

What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Autumn is also my favorite season. Over many years, it has come to represent different things and events as they happened. You very eloquently captures the things that one can usually count on with autumn.

This year, it has been bad hurricane storms. The leaves haven't really turned yet, but they will. Lots of trees down with this latest Michael thing.

The days really do get shorter so quickly. Now, I wake up and it is dark. The mail sometimes arrives in the dark. Lots of fun there with mix-ups.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"Sun surrenders to overcast skies
Leaves change from green to red
The days get a little shorter
The air gets a little crisper"

Yes and there is Pumpkin Latte to be had at Starbucks. All this is true and life is good because of the little things that we hold on to as the years go by.

Very moving and evocative of the most memorable things about the season.

Well done!

*Thumbsup*

tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps a.k.a. HOOves

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such


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