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 Twenty titles- A contest entry  [E]
Contest entry
by Chris Breva
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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         *Pumpkin2* Greetings, Chris Breva ! I found your item, "Twenty titles- A contest entry" , in Random Reviews and decided to review it. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

My First Impression
         What a fun contest challenge! You've done a great job with all your titles nicely fitting into this piece. I don't know the rules, but I would assume you did well. *Smile*

Punctuation/Grammar
         Your periods should go on the inside of your ending quoation marks. Here's an example: "I'm your Boogie Man". should look like... "I'm your Boogie Man."

Suggestions/Thoughts
         The only other suggestion I have is to be consistent with your titles as far as capping the first letter in each word. *Wink* One example is: "Ring my bell." should be changed to... "Ring My Bell."
         There is also the letter "I" after the above song title which I'm sure you didn't mean to be there. *Wink*

         *Starb* My favorite
                             I want to be your "Macho Man" so please don't go "Underground" Love it! *Bigsmile*

*Thumbsup* Good job! I hope my suggestions were helpful. *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*
~Cubby ")
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