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 Review #4445978 |
 Greetings, Norman  ! I found your item, "Invalid Item"  , in Random Reviews and decided to review it.  I also noticed you haven't been a member of WDC for long and I'd like to say "Welcome!!!" First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.My First Impression I loved it! And I can certainly connect with it.  I'm sure many others will connect, too. You are obviously a talented writer.Punctuation/Grammar/Typos I found no punctuation or grammar issues nor any typos! There were no distractions for me anywhere. Suggestions/Thoughts My only suggestion/thought is for you to send in greeting card suggestions to humorous greeting card publications! I'm serious! I actually had Oatmeal greeting cards buy a very simple saying from me for $75! Of course I sent in lots of others along with it, but hey... it's worth a try!   My favorite part...Long in the tooth. Now I get an image of some aging, arthritic vampire. Well, my teeth stopped growing long ago and the challenge now is just to keep them in my mouth. This is great! I love it! (and I laughed out loud!) Nicely written! I hope my suggestion will be something you will consider. Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! ~Cubby ")    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You last responded to this review 10/23/2018 @ 7:07pm EDT