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| (4.5)  Greetings, Bob retired  ! I found your item, "Invalid Item" , in Random Reviews and decided to review it.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.My First Impression Oh my gosh, I know exactly how you feel! I must be a mood writer, too. And it is so frustrating when I get interrupted and then lose my train of thought. By the time I get back to what I was working on, I have to read over what I've already written to refresh my memory.  Punctuation/Grammar/Typos The only thing that stood out was the misspelling of organisation in the second to last paragraph, and organised in your last paragraph. At least in American English, the root word organise is spelled organize. Disreguard, otherwise! Suggestions/Thoughts I liked this very much! It's always nice to know someone else struggles with the same things, and this piece makes me wonder if many others share in this, too.   My favorite line... or I am merely procrastinating as I defer the projects that are already ‘ under construction’. Oh, yes! I completely understand, lol.  Nicely written! I hope my suggestions were helpful. Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! ~Cubby ")    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 10/17/2018 @ 4:54am EDT