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Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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         *Pumpkin2* Greetings, Bwilder+Aquariuventures ! I found your item, "Invalid Item" , in Random Reviews and decided to review it. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

My First Impression
         I love this! It's beautiful... and the message is amazing. Your flow glides like the butterfly you portray to all who reads this. Simply lovely.

Suggestions/Thoughts
         I'm wondering if when you wrote Society blinded your minds if you meant Society blinded your mind. Other than that, nothing else distracted me. I love this piece! It's beautiful... thank you for sharing!

         *Starb* My favorite lines...
Society blinded your minds to your true beauty inside.
Clear out the doubt and imagine it within.
I assure... you are perfectly beautiful... just turn it inside out!

*Thumbsup* Nicely written! I hope my suggestion was helpful. *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*
~Cubby ")
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