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         *Pumpkin2* Greetings, Norman ! I found your item, "Invalid Item" , in Random Reviews and decided to review it. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

My First Impression
         I love this! Not only is it entertaining, it's rhythmic (great meter!), rhymes wonderfully, and flows flawlessy.

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         I actually noticed nothing that distracted me. *Smile*

Suggestions/Thoughts
         No sugestions at all! The last line was fun and witty. Great work! You for-sure have a talent for writing poetry. I beleive I reviewed another item of yours recently and was impressed by your writing skills. I hope your first three weeks here at WDC has been pleasant! *Smile*

         *Starb* My favorite line...
                             So what I’m trying to tell you
         Once I read this line, I had a feeling it might take a turn. *Bigsmile*

*Thumbsup* Nicely written! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*
~Cubby ")
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