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Review #4446996
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 Want.  [E]
When trying isn't enough.
by Finley
Review of Want.  
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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         *Pumpkin2* Greetings, Finley ! I found your item, "Want." , in Random Reviews and decided to review it. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

My First Impression
         Oh, this is so bitter-sweet! I'm not sure if you are writing from experience or not, but I'm going to assume you are. And if you are, your honesty is amazing.

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         I found no issues or distractions

Thoughts
         Thank you for sharing this. It's emotional and heart-felt.

         *Starb* My favorite lines...
                             I search for these feelings
                             I know aren’t there.

*Thumbsup* Nicely written! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*
~Cubby ")
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