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See Worthy  [E]
The sun sets on the ocean. (Form: Rondeau) A Verdant Poetry Entry
by 🌕 HuntersMoon
Review of See Worthy  
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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         *Pumpkin2* Greetings, 🌕 HuntersMoon ! I found your item, "See Worthy" , in Random Reviews and decided to review it. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

My First Impression
         I could read this over and over... I absolutely love it. You obviously are a very talented poet. Your words flow along so freely. I feel like I'm floating on a motorless boat in the moonlight as waves lap gently upon the shore. Extremely soothing!

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
          Nothing distracted me at all.

Suggestions/Thoughts
         This should be in a poetry book! By chance, are you working on a collection of poems? If not, you should! *Wink*

         *Starb* My favorite
                             I watch the moon ascend her throne,
                             her coronation softly shown
                             in muted tones reflectively

*Thumbsup* Nicely written! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*
~Cubby ")
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