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 Greetings, smjones! I found your item, "Invalid Item"  , in Random Reviews and decided to review it.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.My First Impression I love sock poems, lol, and this is so acception. I really enjoyed this.  I'd also like to add how your rhythm bounced pretty evenly along and your rhyming was well done, too.Punctuation/Grammar/Typos/Other Suggestions  You were pretty consistent with your punctuation at first, but further down I noticed you might have forgotten it in a few areas.  In your 8th Stanza, Line 2: Futher categorized by the seasons This line is the only one that felt like it was a wee bit of a mouthful. Would you consider replacing catergorized with sorting or something similar? Further sorted by the seasons (I also just noticed futher should be further.) Thoughts Keep this up! I love this kind of poetry which is fun to read and makes people smile.  My favorite lines... Fresh from Tide and soft from Snuggle – (The Magics of a cleaning Muggle), Oh my gosh, this is so crafty! I love it!  Nicely written! I hope my suggestions were helpful. Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! ~Cubby ")    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 10/26/2018 @ 5:52pm EDT