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 Hollow Singing  [E]
A seashell on a beach sings a song.
by garlictonic
Review of Hollow Singing  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Hollow Singing"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good poem written from the view of a seashell. I appreciate the narrators thought process.

*BurstP* THE POEM: I found this poem is so rhythmic and melodious. The rhyming is soothing to the ear.

*BurstP* FAVORITE LINES:
"Pick me up and hold me close.
Closer and closer, to your ear.
Listen, listen. To the song within.
My tune reverberates, unclear."

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: I can’t wait to read another poem from you. I enjoyed it reading.

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