Hello,

I'm Mastiff, and I'm going to review your work! I'm just an amateur, so take it all with a grain of salt, as it's just my opinions. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I appreciate being able to read it.

First impression:
I must admit, I've never reviewed a review. I was a bit surprised I came across it, and I enjoy trying something different. Having never read any of those on your list, I was interested.

Things That Might Make It Better:
You note one book is science fiction, but don't give the genre of the others. How you read it is interesting, but the former is probably more important to potential readers.

Mechanics:

Sec. 1 Para. 1 Ln. 1- Not sure why this one line is indented.
Sec. 1 Para. 3 Ln. 1- Double space after "firms."
Sec. 2 Para. 1 Ln. 1- I think "writes" works better than "wrote."
Sec. 2 Para. 2 Ln. 3- Comma after "divorced." (You should check through for commas. You've missed quite a few.)
Sec. 4 Para. 1 Ln. 3- I think you hit the "enter" key.
Sec. 4 Para. 2 Ln. 3- Not sure why you dropped down a a line here. (Also a couple places)
Sec. 4 Para. 5 Ln. 3- I would never use more than one question mark.

Overall - Mostly it's reviewing for commas and some polish. I know these are often written quickly, but a quick review is a good idea,

Things I Like:
You give enough of the book to let the reader know if they might enjoy it, but not too much. Often, reviewers give critical information the author means for the reader alone.

Final Comments
I enjoyed reading your reviews, and there are a couple I might give a read. So, no better praise than that!

Mastiff