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Dumb and Dumber  [13+]
Maggie insisted the family “would go on vacation!”
by 🌕 HuntersMoon
Review of Dumb and Dumber  
Review by Cubby
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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         *Pumpkin2* Greetings, 🌕 HuntersMoon ! I found your item, "Dumb and Dumber" , in Random Reviews and decided to review it. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

My First Impression
         Oh my gosh, lol. *Laugh* This is great.

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos

         In Paragraph 4: planning of using it this year I'm thinking you meant on instead of of. *Wink* planning on using it this year

         In Paragraph 7: "We'll take it! You just left out the ending quotation mark here. "We'll take it!"

Thoughts
         Very witty, indeed. An entertaining read, for sure! *Bigsmile*

         *Starb* My favorite line...
                             "I don't know but he's getting dumber and dumber!"
         Hilareous!

BTW... Did you win the contest?

*Thumbsup* Nicely written! I hope my suggestions were helpful. *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*
~Cubby ")
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