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Review #4448905
Viewing a review of:
Wheel of Fortune  [18+]
My blog--I pull a card--if it doesn't speak to me...perhaps it is for you?
by ridinghhood-p.boutilier
         Review for entry/chapter: "October 30. 2018" 
Review of Wheel of Fortune  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am in the I Write in 2018 activity and you posted before me in the forum. As always, it is my pleasure to read and review your work.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* This poem is about remembering a place you love.

I am horrified by what transpired in Pittsburgh. It is a monstrous thing, but you have risen above that with a wonderful remembrance of poetry. We think of our childhoods (if we are lucky) as safe havens. I thought this was remarkable and the words resonate with the cherishing of what went before and what is to be overcome going forward.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This part stays with me:

"I lay a spray of flowers
at water's edge.
I whisper prayers
for the Tree of Life."

May we all face the future with such gentleness and grace. Beautifully written and I am so sorry for the deed that was done.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 
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