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Writer's Block  [E]
For some, silence is the sound of creativity.
by Ray Scrivener
Review of Writer's Block  
Review by Cubby
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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         *Pumpkin2* Greetings, Ray Scrivener ! I found your item, "Writer's Block" , in Random Reviews and decided to review it. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

My First Impression
         I really connect with this, especially the part about expressing your thoughts onto paper but not upon a stage!

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos/Flow
         Well... the flow was great throughout the first three stanzas. Then I lost it, though just a little. Mostly in the first lines of the 4th and 5th stanzas. It's like the meter changed. Try reading the entire poem aloud. Does the rhythm change? (If you are fine with it, disregard my comment on this.) *Smile* Other than that, nothing else distracted me whatsoever!

Thoughts
         You definitely have a gift for poetry. *Smile* I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. And by the way, Welcome to WDC! I just noticed you've only been here for a few weeks. *Smile*

         *Starb* My favorite line...
                             Pulling stories from thin air,
                             and setting each one free.

*Thumbsup* Nicely written! I hope my suggestions were helpful. *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*
~Cubby ")
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