Second Time Around ~ Birthday Special [E] Have you entered previous contests that you didn't win? Do you feel cheated? Step inside. |
Greetings, Choconut ~ House Targaryen ! I found your item, "Second Time Around ~ Birthday Special" , while scrolling through "Writing Contests @ Writing.Com" and decided to review it. First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. My First Impression What a great idea for a contest! When an item is judged for a contest and does not place, it's not always because that item was not well-written, but it might not've been the exact fit to win that specific contest. Now your contest gives these entries a second chance! I love it~ (I'll have to go through my portfolio and dig a few of my own out. ) Punctuation/Grammar/Typos I found no distractions whatsoever! Suggestions/Thoughts I have no sugestions. It looks like you've had plenty of donators, too, which will help keep this contest going. It helps when a merit badge is offered for a specified amount. And you have two MBs along with two specified gp amounts. Nice! I will be sending a 40,000 gp donation for your contest along with this review. My favorite part of this piece is the spirit of giving well-written entries a second chance. I think it's wonderful to offer an old piece new life. Love this idea! Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! ~Cubby ")
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