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I like this narrative and informative, non rhyme poems about stars. It is a educational piece of write. You described beautifully how a stars born from dust or gas and how do they transformed and die producing helium-3. I found that you have many science poem in your port. And I have to say they are so informative. This poem tells a story of stars and it’s very beautiful and are full of images for me!

Mina

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