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This is a beautiful poem. So informative. It flowed extremely well with your crafted words. I like the images you have painted in your poem. The descriptions are well written and very vivid and artistic. I like the lines “Made history, three men's bravery, plain for all to see
Seen live on TV around the globe, none before so bold”

Mina
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