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This is a lovely poem, I like the beautiful picture you added here. I like the sound, smells that merged together. The poem effectively forms a beautiful image in the mind of the reader. The ending is beautiful. I like the lines "That's when the first swaying leaf gently detaches
flannel and blue blanketed in the ear gush
Colorful feathers of joy sweep a pale horizon
What can this season be, if not our bliss end?"

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