Good Morning Naverine2,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

I like the rhythm of your poem "Land of Make Believe".

This "Land of Make Believe" poem of yours is very unique and inspiring to me.

There were no distractions throughout your poem which made it more interesting and enjoyable.

Ending: Well Done!

Line-by-line and Suggestions: None at this point and time.

Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations.

Blessed Writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle



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