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 A Colorful Life  [13+]
Winner of the 300 Word Daily Flash Fiction (years ago)
by Angus
Review of A Colorful Life  
Review by Cubby
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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         *Pumpkin2* Greetings, Angus ! I found your item, "A Colorful Life" , in Random Reviews and decided to review it. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

My First Impression
         *Shock2* I HONOSTLY DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!!! *Laugh* What a great ending! And this won 1st place, I see. *Wink* I can see why. Great work!

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         Nothing popped out at me at all, Angus. Your piece here is very clean. *Thumbsup*

Suggestions/Thoughts
         No suggestions whatsoever, but I do have some thoughts. I am very impressed with this tiny little 300 page story. It makes me want to try it, too! *Smile* Though I'm not so sure I'd be good at it. You certainly are though! I also liked the italicized words thrown in for emphasis here and there. I like to use italics, too, for stressing certain words.

         *Starb* My favorite
                             And up in the corner of the picture was a big yellow sun with a smiley face on it. But the more she thought about it, the more that smile didn’t look like a smile. It looked more like a grin.

*Thumbsup* Nicely written! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*
~Cubby ")
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