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 Winter Promises  [E]
summer ceding to fall
by Sherry Asbury
Review of Winter Promises  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Winter Promises"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

I like the simplicity of this poem. I appreciate the craftsmanship of your writing and the way you painted nature. It reminds me beautiful days of winter. I like the title as well. It fit's your poem.

My favorite lines "Where is the glow of summer
that warmed my weary soul
I have looked in corners
and under beds, in cupboards"

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