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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of"The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*Bulletg* The Poem:I like the words of this poem and the way you put your feelings. Beautifully sketched the conflicts of human mind.

*Bulletg* IMAGERY: Your poem telling a story. The descriptions are vivid.

*Thumbsup* FAVORITE LINES: I like the ending lines
"But because I own your heart
Every bit as much as you own mine."

*Bulletg* RHYTHM: It is easy to read and understand, but I think it would be more beautiful if you make it rhyme .

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem.

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