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Review #4451105
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 The First Years  [E]
For SLAM!ME Round 7
by Sophy
Review of The First Years  
Review by Cubby
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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         *Pumpkin2* Greetings, Sophy ! I found your item, "The First Years" , in Random Reviews and decided to review it. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

My First Impression
         This brought back many memories for me... clipping coupons from the Sunday paper, timing phone calls, board games, guitars... And though I never stepped over homeless people in the city, I was always reminded of the starving children in Siberia whenever I didn't want to eat my vegetables. Anyway, this was a pleasure to read. *Heart* Thank you for sharing!

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         Nothing whatsoever distracted me.

Suggestions/Thoughts
         No suggestions. A great piece!

         *Starb* My favorite lines because I still feel this way, lol...
                             excited to discover
                             what treasures had been cast aside

*Thumbsup* Nicely written! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*
~Cubby ")
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