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Review #4451137
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 Finger Forgetfulness  [13+]
My fingers have forgotten how to spell,
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
Review by Cubby
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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         *Pumpkin2* Greetings, Prosperous Snow celebrating ! I found your item, "Finger Forgetfulness" , in Random Reviews and decided to review it. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

My First Impression
         This is great! I absolutely love this, Neva. *Smile* I'm sure many others feel the same way.

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         1st Stanza - 2nd line: on they keyboard should be on the keyboard

Suggestions/Thoughts
         No more suggestions, and the one I suggested was not your fault *Wink*. I think it was that alien from Mars or Venus, so it doesn't count! Nice work. You are very talented!

         *Starb* My favorite lines...
                             My fingers have a mind of their own,
                             They type in words that I don't recognize,
         I can certainly connect with this! *Bigsmile*

*Thumbsup* Nicely written! I hope my suggestion was helpful. *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*
~Cubby ")
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