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First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is indeed a good entertaining piece. It has good rhythm. The words are pure, honest, but very true. Especially last four lines are humorous it made me laugh. Yes, the true fact it a good friend is difficult to find. I like the lines

“Good friends are hard to come by
They don’t just come along
You have to be a friend yourself
Stand by him right or wrong”

It has wonderful thoughts.
I could relate to it. I enjoyed it.

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