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Immigration  [13+]
A short opinion piece about immigration in America
by iKïyå§ama-House Targaryen
Review of Immigration  
Review by Cubby
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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         *Pumpkin2* Greetings, iKïyå§ama-House Targaryen ! I found your item, "Immigration" , in Random Reviews and decided to review it. *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

My First Impression
         What an interesting piece! And what made this even more compelling, was the fact that you were an immigrant. I was engrossed by your article and views on the subject. You've presented this somewhat touchy topic very well. Perhaps you should run for a political office. *Wink*

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         Nothing distracted me whatsoever.

Thoughts
         I love the quotes you begin and end your article with. I hope others will read this piece. It's very well written. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and ideas on this. I thought they were excellent! I don't know the answer to this border issue, but I don't like the direction we've been going in at present.

         *Starb* My favorite line...
                             At the end of the day, I can only hope for a world where borders and barriers are finally broken; and we can all live in harmony as one.


*Thumbsup* Nicely written! I hope my suggestions were helpful. *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*
~Cubby ")
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